Luis Vargas
Ms. Peifer
English 10Ib
5/28/12
Drinking
Alone beneath the Moon commentary
Drinking Alone Beneath
the Moon, by Li Po Poems demonstrates
a overall dominate effect that everything in nature is alive. The author also incorporates
the principles of Taoism which make the poem very lively. The author also uses
a lot of imagery and personifies many things in nature to establish the overall
message that everything in the nature is alive. The author uses very descriptive
imagery to make the reader understand that everything around the narrator is
alive in a way.
The
moon is the very first thing that Li Po gives life to in the poem. Li Po makes
the moon seem very alive when the narrator wants invite the moon to join him in
his drinking. “I raise my cup to invite the moon to join me “(3). These lines
make the reader comprehend how alive the moon is; if the moon can take a drink
with the narrator it clearly demonstrates the moon has been personified and
been given life to making the moon alive. Li Lo personifies the moon to make
the moon have a feeling about the idea of drinking with the narrator “Alas the
moon is unconcerned about drinking” (5). If the moon is unconcern about
drinking it demonstrates that the moon has feeling. Another great example of
how the moon is personified is when they narrator starts singing to eat and the
moon starts rocking back and forth. “ I sing and the moon goes back and forth”(
9). If the moon can rock back and forth it clearly demonstrates once again that
the moon is very alive. This line is also a great example of image that is
expressed through the poem. The reader can achieve an image of the moon rocking
back and forth happily, making the reader believe that the moon is very alive.
Another
great example on how things are given life and personified is when the narrator
starts dancing with its shadow. “Briefly I cavort with the moon and my shadow” (7).
If the narrator can covert with his shadow the shadow is one again given life
to prove the dominate effect that everything is given life.
This
poem and Taoism are being compared together because everything revolves around
nature in both of them. Taoism is a nature based philosophy and the poem is
also based on the bond between nature and mankind. They are both compared to be
alike in a way as whole rather than individual parts of the poem and life. This
comparison is achieved by boning nature and mankind through the poem. For example,
the moon, the shadow, and the narrator are bonded together to drink together through
the poem. Mankind is expressed to be lonely but nature creates a strong bond between
them since the narrator only friend is nature.
Li
Po used very well personified imagery to demonstrate the dominant effect the everything
in the world is alive. Li Po also compares this poem to Taoism and how nature
revolves around it to give nature a very lively spirit.